Why does my teacher say my thesis is vague?
You wrote “School uniforms affect students” and the margin says “so what?”. The sentence is true, and that is exactly the problem: nobody could argue with it.
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Why can't I add one more idea at the end?
Your conclusion is the last thing a reader sees, and adding a brand-new point there undoes the structure you built. It is a small fix with a large effect.
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